Writing an Essay

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What Do Our Possessions Say About Us?

What do the things we own say about us?
Better yet, what do we think the things we own say about us to OTHERS?

What do the things we own say about us? Better yet, what do we think the things we own say about us to others?

Does what we have make us feel successful? If we have “a lot” do we think this is a sign God is favouring us? Does how much we own show we are better than those who own less, but not as good as those who own more?

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What do the things we own say about us? Better yet, what do we think the things we own say about us to others?

Does what we have make us feel successful? If we have “a lot” do we think this is a sign God is favouring us? Does how much we own show we are better than those who own less, but not as good as those who own more?

- See more at: http://www.the-generous-husband.com/2013/06/02/what-do-our-possessions-say-about-us/#sthash.53QXigxR.dpuf

What do the things we own say about us? Better yet, what do we think the things we own say about us to others?

Does what we have make us feel successful? If we have “a lot” do we think this is a sign God is favouring us? Does how much we own show we are better than those who own less, but not as good as those who own more?

- See more at: http://www.the-generous-husband.com/2013/06/02/what-do-our-possessions-say-about-us/#sthash.53QXigxR.dpuf

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